lmao @ parralel... voting for D-ception.. i mean yah dception came pretty good but cali had great imagery.. his emotion was on point... vocab was good the whole way thru.. i felt like i was in the scenario while reading it... this was a really interesting piece..

D-ception u came pretty well and for being up against cali u brought ur a-game.. but me being a decent poet myself(former poet of the month) i know hot to crit poetry.. and i can tell that ur pretty new to this.... u just dont have a good poetry feel when im reading ur shit..... dont get me wrong its good but cali just came a little harder.. keep it up tho..

V/Cali.. lmao parralel.. what a herb..

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