yo i was feelin dis...i liked da first verse dis section right here
Im not happy as I seem... Though I just casually pretend,
As we begin, though we'd never imagine the hazards we in,
They're brought to life so vividly like waves crashin againest,
The boulders... And on my shoudlers are smashin with dents,
Problems are attractin so easily, im like magnets to them,
Picture them approachin with no end, so a chapter begins,
That was already hittin me so hard when acted againest,
Can I enter the good life? Too bad i can't practice it and,
Maybe live in paradise, too ridiculous to even imagine it then,

it all seemed to flow togetha....nice subject stayed on topic thru-out
is dat true??if it is i feel for ya man....good shit....keep it comin