Voted For: Blac-Out

Lyrical scripts- Your grammer was wrong...Flow was was choopy. lines was stretchY.......dONT stretch your lines that much........Punches was played and not very effective, still need some elevation.........Personal you use was ok........The only thing that was weak in your verse was flow and on the balance "punches" .......




Blac-out- You had some flow, and some effective punches, still need some elevation in process of that.....You need to add multi'z...and deep personals too.......Either way, you need elevation on punches and dont stectch your lines that much........




Overall=both in need of serious elevation. Punches was played in Lyrical scripts verse......FLow was fucked as the same.......Blac-out verse had some potential threw some punches but wasnt very good but was effective though...Lyrical came played and weak.......While blac-out came a little effective with his punches........Vote blac-out cause of harder punches and mostly harder flow

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