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Old 02-01-05, 10:36 PM   #15
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Voted For: BlackDeathDB

BLACk-Punches was ok, needs to elevate though......Wordplay i like the "nickelodeon" line very creative fam.......Flowed good...All flow and punches...You need some multi'z and add some personals to your verse....




Kel-Ok punches came weak, not hard hitting. Effective but weak. Flowed good. Disses his name thats a personal but you need to go deeper than that...Add multi'z to your verse....Wordplays too




overall=I think Black got this, cause he threw some effective punches, While kel threw some weak ones, not very hard hitting. Both head'z (kel and black) needs to work on punches and wordplays and using personals. I vote for black cause he threw some effective punches, kel threw weak punches, need elevation though BOTH HEADS DO.
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