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Old 02-01-05, 11:39 PM   #25
Magic5
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Voted For: E.C

Adrenaline
take off the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. structure is pretty bad.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. u had good multis.. wordplay was mad weak.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

E.C.
dont explain all of ur punches.. its mad newbish.. structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay wasnt very good.. it was attempted though.. a few, at best of ur punches connected.. most of them were played though.. u attempted a personal..

Overall
Adrenaline had more multis.. E.C. had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and an attempted personal.. so basing off of that.. E.C. gets my vote..

VOTE - E.C.