Voted For: Rambo

Rambo
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

NeptuneHurricane
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. ur structure is very inconsistent.. flow falls off due to the inconsistency.. u had a few multis.. wordplay is weak.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
NeptuneHurricane had more multis.. neither had good personals.. Rambo had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Rambo gets my vote..

VOTE - RAMBO