Voted For: kelsick39

I was feelin both verses but it broke down like this:

BlackDeathDB: Your opener was ok. It needed to be stronger and on more of a personal level. Not too sure bout his blimp being broke..?
Closer was ok buit again lacked the finishing touch. His ass getting sick isnt really dissing him very hard. But i see where you were going.
Your punches were ok, not really personal enough, some ok attempts at metaphors but with no real wordplay or anything complicated but still quite good to read.

Kelsick: Nice opener, good multis and nice punch. Be proud of that one bro.
Closer was good aswel, i defo saw wat you were doing wiv the middle ages, peasant theme in that bar. -good work.
Some nice punches aswel as DB, once again, not very complicated but only time can improve that (and practice) get some more metaphors and wordplay going on. But overall your opener and closer gave you the edge in this battle

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