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Old 02-02-05, 11:09 AM   #13
Dex
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Voted For: Guv`nor

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Da King: Ok verse. You operner was weak, i didnt know london and bombin rhymed. and the self-glorification in a battle is a big no-no!
Closer was better but still alacked any real quality,m couple of multis but no rela metaphor and a weak punch.
Your punches on the whole were not very good. No metaphors, or wordplay but a few multis. Mainly the verse was "infant" but you can definately get better.

Guv'nor: nice drop. opener was nice, good punch with a personal touch, nice way to start it.
Closer was the tits! got him with two metaphors and a nice punch.
You had some real good lines in there, i liked the jester one. top marks. Good metaphors, hard hitting punches that deinately hit the targets. Overall much better than your opponants
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