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Old 02-02-05, 11:32 AM   #11
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Mad Dog

aight well... this was a long over due battle in my oppinion... so... here is my break down...:

Effect- well kid its like this... structure i feel was ass, it was stretched out as fuck! although you kept it consistant throughout so thats a good thing and it didnt hurt your flow to much except for the fact that it was stretched out... punches really were hit and miss, you had a couple of ok ones in there but nothing spectacular to speak of really... personals were another story, they were really non existant... vocab was aight and metas could use some work... overall this was an OK drop and i respect that you finaly steped up to m-dog... 5/10

M-dog- aight man here it goes... i really liked the structure cause im a big fan of centering it cause it presents the verse well... flow was tight throughout the verse. punches were good but could have been a little better i belive... personals were kick ass tho! i personaly liked the closer about "sinnerbitch" cause that was a tight song in my opinion... vocab was real good... using words like disfigured and scriptures, tight! metas were aight. no multis but thats aight... overall sweet drop man... 8/10


aight now... no hate at all to effect/sinner cause you came at Mdog and i gotta respect that. im glad this battle finaly wend down but i gotta give it to M-dog because his verse was just all around better... sinner work on your structure dawg, dont stretch it out so much cause that will hurt you a lot in text battling... no hate at all to either of you but this was a tight battle and its about time it went down!

Aight so good battle...

VOTE- M-Dog