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Old 02-02-05, 03:37 PM   #86
Premanition
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Nice Battle, Here It Is-

Final -
Dope Piece here, ur gettin beta all the time n i like the thought that went into some of ya barz here, cud feel a certain amount of emotion also which was gud, vocab was above average and ya flow was on point throughout.

Personify-
Again nice piece here, flow was flawless n it was quite original the thing that let it down for me was the simplisity of some of ur rhymes, i found myself bein able to predict wot the next line wud end in, i don't like that, n also ya vocab cud be uppin, but apart from that nice piece


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