Voted For: final

Alrite nice battle

Final-

Nice verse not ya best but was still gud, felt a degree of emotion in this one and some gud descriptive writtin which i personally like alot in a topical, flow was gud in most parts, but stook to the topic well and had some nice vocab

parrallel-
O.k nice verse dawg, like ya sed different style to wot wud have been expected with this title which can be a gud thing but on this occasion i feel it went against ya, ya flow was perfect but i felt ur storyline was slightly off topic although original n felt ya cud have upped ya vocab slightly, but still nice


this was very close cos i've seen both come alot beta, but final sneeks this

pz

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