Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: H-N-I-C
da king-u had a nice verse, but ur structure messed it all up. ur lines were stretched in some places, and then they were not finished in some places. ur punches were kinda played, and that oprah winfrey line was clean. but, c'mon...u kno jay-z said that. but whatever, u still lost..
jay-z "...then i move tha weight like im oprah's son...uh...i
ll show u how to do this son..."
not xactly bitin i guess, same concept tho...
hinc-yo verse was there. u came harder in punches and mettas. i was feelin ur personals, but i think u should elevate a lil in that, cuase they were kinda simple. yo structure was wayy better in this one, and thats tha main reason i gave u tha win....
overall-hnic took this one by far to me, but i still think yall should elevate more on originality, and better wordplay...
plz return tha vote on battle link in sig...against CJ...last one...that would be much appreciated. cause i took tha time out to vote on this, and i xplained it. so plz xplain ur votes...
good drops, but still everyone can elevate
~1~
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