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Old 02-02-05, 08:39 PM   #9
50Cal.
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

ok one theres a rule it has to be 10 lines are better anything under you lose but anyways phive wack no punches or good disses no personals i could see either vocab was 2nd grade level on your verse struture was off lines look like
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i see this alot wtf is that?
anyways squad up decent punches the 5 alive bar was decent you need to word ya shit better though punches are decent but could be real good with a lil better wording sun and dont talk about gun play youll lose points for that cuz you cant bust no gun on the net doggie otherwise decent verse vocab is pretty good but way better punches struture and shit got you this ez and got you my vote
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