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Old 02-02-05, 11:15 PM   #6
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Voted For: Illmatic

Illmatic: you had better flow and punches overall, better vocab too, but one thing, don't explain every punch you make, that's herbish.

Life: your verse is ok, but you need to work on your vocab and flow and structure.....and don't leave spaces between each bar, that's herbish.

Overall Illmatic completely owned life
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