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Old 02-02-05, 11:31 PM   #15
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Kamikazee

Aight both y'all lines were hella stretched.. however i felt Kamikazee were bringing more punches.. your opener was a good start for you..
I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
^that was a nice way to start out.. your second bar was only decent the part about sonic was not hot....... the first half was pretty good tho..
closer:
not too hot for a closer but was fairly decent..

Kesse
with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
^^coulda been worded better to make a better attempt at a punch..
you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
^^you coulda changed that up a lil'.... to make that effective..

aight i judged a few lines from both y'all... in this case however, Kamikazee took this battle with a few more concepts and punches.. both y'all verses were stretched tho.. BUT my vote goes to Kamikazee.
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