Thread: Murkz vs Kas
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Old 02-02-05, 11:38 PM   #19
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Voted For: Kas

Murks what happened to ya structure and ya flow...
i call u out n im ready, come on murkz is da best
i hunger 4 more
but u, nah ur thirst cant contest
^^as a closer this is very weak..

opener for kas took this one alone..
girls say hi to you, nah they hate ya
ya couldnt catch a wave if ya lived in asia
^^usin the tsunamis.. dayum nice punch

and this line was a really good personal:
Murkz!? i'ma be smackin this lame
especially when ya record,
2 losses away from bein as wack as ya name//

I must say both of you came pretty weak.. but overall Kas took the battle.. even tho Murks closer out done yours, you got personal with your lines and ya flow was better as well as your concepts, both of you need to work on structure also.. and try using metaphors and or wordplay, or maybe multis.. but for the battle as is i give the vote to Kas....
stay up, kids and elevate..
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