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Old 02-02-05, 11:45 PM   #25
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Da King

HNIC
This nigga calls himself da King.......yeah I guess I can see it
Cuz he was jockin the king of pop when he first heard Beat It
^^rofl best opener... lol
U more like The King's daughter slobbin up pedophiles
I heard u was in Neverland makin Mike and Bubbles smile
^^getting played, these Neverland lines.... but the first half was decent..
Versatile wit my writin style time to switch it up
It's sad u haven't battled once and u already outta luck
^^nice closer.... not bad seemed like a quick key

Da King:
well first of all i'm the king you aint in charge
you hella scared dat's why you only want four bars
^^nice opener.. lol aight punch
you a phony actin' crunk lik' you go do sumthin'
when i'll drop you in dese' streets like J.Lo's husbands
^^not a good rhyme scheme lost points there u stretched that rhyme scheme, concept not bad tho..
get when i spit it deep lik' fifty
i move so much weight u might think i'm oprahwinfrey
^^you talkin bout celebs, diss HNIC.. lose the self-glorification lines..
an' wit dis last line remember dat i bomb
i'll leave you on da' corna' working nex' to ya mom
^^lol nice closer not bad either... I thought HNIC had some nice punches but I feel Da King was a lil' more original with his lines.. This was a close battle but Da King took this one in my opinion but slightly.. stay up, you 2..
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