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Old 02-03-05, 01:14 AM   #6
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Voted For: Sand

aight you win


KON... your structure was mad off work on that shit....also your lines are played as fuck no real good personals are anygood metaphores....i didnt see snything that cought my...your opener was weak....i understand how you set it up ....the st up was nice but it was a stupid punch......if your opener would have been a lil more better....OR if you would have posted a pci of him so that we no this kid looks lieka monkey...but thats hit just didnt hit

SAND: your shit was also hela weak.....i understand your a VET on RB but here on RV you need to eelavte alot more.....try to work on your wordplay and your metaphores...structur was kinda nice but your lines were streched........you only one this battle because of your one good personal
This bitch think's just cuz his dad's a crip, automatically make's you ghetto?

^^that shit was weakly set up and was super streched but it hit hard.....

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