i didnt like the begining....hennesy....man its all about E an J

lol

but for real this shit was aight....i can tell that you wanna elevaTE... you are trying to be one of the bets at topicals and poetry,,,,,,all you need is a lil more work.....i understand ( you may be good) in text but these are totally different... you need different vocab..you need words that express more than just one sensary detail....ya feel

thats pretty much it for now...get back to this later

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