Well I cant vote for whatever reason, so I'll leave feedback.

Critic-- I feel that you are rhyming sort of text book style. Maybe you need to let your flow go a bit more.. Use some multi syllable and compound syllable rhyming more often.. To try and make your stuff sound more natural as opposed to being forced out. Thats just how I felt. Other than that, try and put meaning behind your lyrics.. Too many people just try and spark emotions with topicals, thats the easy way.. The proper way to make a topical verse good is by giving your opinion on an issue and teaching people something. If you can make people go "wow, thats changed my whole perspective" then you can be garenteed to have their vote.