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Old 02-03-05, 03:02 PM   #23
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damn, this was nice, you had some lines that were iffy but mic (old name i think.lol) you had some lines that i reread cuz they were so nice,negative side for 1.get red of the slash///
its annoyin 2...ya closer was ok,...kinda brutal n honest n real..overall im going with you cuz i my opinion you stayed on topic more...7.8/10
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this was real close, props to both
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wow, nice job, you deffinately kno how to take a subject n be original with it,..i liked this, overall i think you could improve if you had better structure(shorten ya lines by 2 words or so)last half of ya drop was better...it picked up throughout like a topicals supposed to.....nice job.1!
.good approach to the topic...7.5/10
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pz...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!