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Voted For: Spektikul
Spek:
wow, that almost perfect. the imagery was butter. seems you put a lot of emotion into it. your enitre verse was dope, from start to finish...nice piece. your structure played a positive role, since your flow was good...it forced the story to be readable and easily comprehended. your story true or not, crossed boundries ive never seen encountered even in novels. the system of events in your verse lead to the tragic ending, and was clear this kid was neglected. his parents, his peers, and himself were all insecure about his potential as a human being. mad porps. you came the best with this one.
Lyric: your verse was good as well, you have the ideal topical elements mastered, the word fundamental is an understatement to you. quote that if you want. ha. your piece did a nice job painting a picture of sorrow. good job as well.
V/ spek
favored his verse more, nice topic...both did good.
should be considered best topical battle of february.
dont return the favor, that is not why i vote.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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