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02-03-05, 03:10 PM
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$iNthetic Harl3m
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this was pretty good.. nd i kno its all true so it made it even better.. i think u could work a little on vocab.. but u stayed on topic and the structure was good.. i liked how it all went together.. over all 7.8/10 keep it up
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