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Old 02-03-05, 05:41 PM   #8
Lord.Wun
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hahah i like the opener that shit was pretty good. umm good use of Personals and punches i was feelin it fo sho...good shyt fam lay....just work on your structure and flow. other than that this shit was humerous and thats alwayz a plus in a battle

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mayn i hate tht nasty ass structure u need to fix it up...its ugly as heyll. LOL..but word thaz sum koo shyt.....u had good multis u can tell u came from hollafront cuz of the structure but it dont work here...

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