Voted For: Legend
word ur shyt was better by a bit Jfour had better structure and flow but u had better punches ad vocabulary.....so i say u get this by a bit....
legend word of advice...shorten ur lines mayn its beginning to look ugly as heyll LOL. word...and do u take time to colour each line black and grey? lol
J Four: good structure but the rest was blah.....ur punches was aiight and personals was decent
vote: legend
can u return da fav'
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