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Old 02-03-05, 05:47 PM   #19
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Tstorm

there's not much 2 explain dis a 6 bar battle..but i felt storm shit more it sound like u were tryin da get a lil personal and empire u was just talkin bout some other shit fam and some of ya lines were short then long it doesn't flow rite...

opener-empire da secod line was creative...storm shit was cool but not really hard
structure-storm..
punchlines-a tie
creativity-empire
flow-storm
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-storm ima give it 2 me cuzz he tried and u didn't empire
enjoyed-basically ya'll were a tie but i think storm takes dis by a lil bit cuzz his verse was neat and battlin is personal and he had 1

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