Voted For: Lord.Wun

Lord Wun

Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four"..
Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore..

Liked it. Very good opener. 10/10

Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart"..
Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart..

Guess I liked it. just work on your shit like that.8/10

But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms..
'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned..

Well nice bar and I liked the way it flowed. 10/10

But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks..
I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off, ..So now he walks with strap on Dicks..

There I finiished ur line. Ver dope closing 10/10

You need to improve and land ur punches better thats all.

Don't even need to vote for him. he needs work in all. Just work on it. You''ll do good....

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