Voted For: J~FOUR

Your shit was ok. U shouldve explained ur rymes after the verse. it would sounded 10x better that way. Ur flow was good and u kept direct wit ur punches. metaphores werent all that but It was ok. ok word play.
punch. j4
meta.j4
flow. j4
word. J4
overall verse j4

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..