Voted For: Lord.Wun

Lord.Wun...

you had some tite ass shit... most def took this... you had better structure and better metaphors and better everything...

point blank TuNiT... you need to work on alot... your style reminds me of Shottaboi... and that's definately not good. Structure is important in text... work on it. And Also up your punches as well.

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