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Voted For: Invektive
Aiight look both came weak as hell.. METEO, you tried some multies so that was good but you didnt follow through with them enough, and you had absolutly no punches.
Invektive, #1 dont ever rely on links to be your punchline, that was weak like whoa.. I think you definatly need to work on concepts and punchlines, but you got potential.
The other dude needs to work on everything. But I think thats cause he probably just started writing rhymes.. So just keep at it man.
PEACE.
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