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Old 02-04-05, 12:00 AM   #11
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Voted For: Audios

vote goes too: Audios....good battle by both

Audios, punches were there, personals got the job done, no multis, maybe work on that....flow was nice to read, structure, eh, could be better, nice orginality on the second line, opener, little overplayed but still goes good with your whole verse....finisher was ok, but came harder than kami's, so good spit man....just maybe try insertin some multis and maybe upp the vocab, but nice drop for your first

Kamikazee...good drop and all, but really weak, didnt really go anywhere with your punches, and no personals at all, just kinda listed a whole bunch of memebers names....i liked the middle line, thought it was your strong point, flow and structure were money, but lack of strong punches, personals were your big killa...and maybe get some more vocab in there too

punches: audios
personals: audios
flow: tie
structure: audios
vocab: tie
originality: audios
multis: none

overall: gotta take audios, came harder with stronger punches and beat em with the personals....word
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