I was entertained long enough to read the whole thing... so that gets you a 5 at least... lol
No but it was good and you show quite a bit of potential and fuck code steel... IE crews ain't never last very long... but I do admit they are great farm crews
NOK... cheap nock off of a wack crew.
but back to your open mic... I'll give it a 6.5/10 good work bro.