Voted For: d.j em sce

I'm going for d.j here.
dj- You had a nice deep piece, more complex and the structure was on point. Nice vocab not over done, and it flowed well.

flow-Nice piece, but too simple to me, good use of vocab and you told the story well. structure was good and appealing. But d.j. just had the edge.

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