Voted For: Cannibal Fetus

this battle wasn't hot at all... anywayz here's the critique:

Cannibal Fetus had more lines one punch to take the win compared to Mc Will Power's long line of rambling, your structure is really messed up, i have no idea what you were tryna say to her.. ya rhyme was more simpler than CF... i think you need to practice before you start battling, go to the Tutorial section for advice on punches, metaphors and the whole set-up... but how this battle lookin, Cannibal Fetus won this one..
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