Voted For: THE_ONE

i liked how social outsider took this topic and made a stand point where the insane man was hearing voices and talkin to himself.. Da Illest you came pretty straight forward but i wasn't feeling your whole set up... i felt like you coulda gave an idea of the plan instead of just laying it out right away.. give your readers something to look into, and keep them guessing.. however you content was still nice, just need to work on what i mentioned.. these lines were effective in this battle:
I'm thinking out loud that is why my mouth is moving....
They keep me in this jacket and this padded room my sanity I'm steadily loosing....
so when I'm released from my prison I know what must be done...
I can't take another day without looking at the sun....
so I'm going back home since from heaven I was sent....
and when I'm gone all my past sins GOD shall repent....
^^that was an excellent portion of your piece, social.outsyder.... you stuck to the topic well (both of you).. But i'm leaning towards the better setting (plot) and content.. social.outsyder..

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