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Old 02-04-05, 01:08 PM   #39
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Voted For: CounTREE Jay

Aight this was a nice battle...... I must say that both of you did pretty well, both had some good and bad parts to y'all verse... JDOT i like how you dissed the whole crew at the beginning but you never threw any direct punches at CJ besides this bar:
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves

but you had a few decent personals in general like:
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
^^not bad...
However, your opener and closer was not good at all... But i was feeling your metaphors combine with multis.. not a bad combination.. but you gotta knock the shit outta ya opponent wit some punches, which i felt you were lackin this in your verse..

CounTREE Jay:
ya opener was aight... i like your personals using Red Beam and this portion:
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
^^that was a good punch and personal.. you coulda worded the third line better, however.... i liked how you dissed his whole crew as a finisher..
You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
^^was an aight closer...
Aight from looks of this battle, CJ won because of his consistency wit punches........ he had some good personals to combine wit his punches.. even tho his was shorter he took this win easily..
v/ CJ
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