Voted For: Drama Queen

3rd Shift:

You had an alright verse dawg. I think you had to stay away from talkin bout being in jail and having no money tho. Went a little off topic in places, although it relates to the topic..it just didnt flow. I wasnt feeling the dashes at the end of your lines either, you need to lose those. Vocab was not bad. Some lines were way longer than some of the others but it flowed alright. Imagry was there. Good Job 74/100.

Drama Queen:

Damn girl, this was a tight drop. You had amazing imagry that made your overall verse seem almost like a true story (which in some ppl's lives im sure it is). Dividing your verse into 2 sections made your verse overall more effective. Pretty good vocab...very descriptive word choice. And that ending was just awsome. One thinig to remember for next time is to watch your line length...if you didnt have flow - those lines woulda lost my vote. Very good job, props. Overall 85/100

No hate 3rd Shift...I just felt Drama Queen came a bit harder than you today. Someones gotta win, and Im sure the votes will show that she did...better luck next time dawg. Payce.