i'm outta this shit...... i swear poems don't have to GRAB a person into a topical u can say something like "the cold wind brushed the window pane, yet no one can hear it" that lil' line is considered a piece of poetry as well as "the wind, soft gentle wind, the shift in the breeze, it stops to set the fog at ease". you don't have to draw someone into a poem, if you read ancient poetry you would know that, no beef wit nobody.. but i'm just saying............. i'm out.....
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