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Old 02-04-05, 02:41 PM   #28
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Hot Sauce

whoooooo flow and multis was crazee datz whuts up fam...ya structure need some work tho alot of niggaz aint gon be able da follow dat....flamin barz fam u good but u didn't go as hard as hot did i seen u do betta u lose dis 1 tho..no hate true story

opener-hot sauce i was feelin da multis ya flow was good alos..flamin ya opener wasn't strong at all
structure-flamin takes dis his shit was neat..and hot ya shit need work fam
punchlines-hot took dis wun his shits were original..flamin u aint really have nun dat stood out
multis-hot dis were he killed it at shits was crazee...flamin i seen about 1 from u
flow-hot even tho some of his lines stretched da multis help da flow...flamin ya was good but his was betta
creativity-hot ofcourse...
personals-nun from both of u

hot sauce took dis..

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