yea i honestly wasnt feelin your flow.....it wasnt too great in the first verse....although it did improve in the second verse....you just need to work on your flow a lot......delivery was pretty good.....beat was nice for this type of topic......the hook....you shoulda put some more emotion into it in my opinion.....it did seem like you were reading it........just elevate yourself..........lyrics were pretty good by the way

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