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Voted For: headgames
HeadGames
Alright, Nice Verse, Had Some Decent Punches In Here, Also Had Some WordPlay That I Liked, Vocabulary Was Decent, Structure Was Decent, And Came With Neat Personals, THis Verse Was Creative, Your Opener Came Out Strong, But The Body Of The Verse, Wasn't As Good As The Closer, But It Was Neat Nuff To Get You This Battle, Some Lines Was Played, But Other Made Up For Them, Strong Verse.....9/10
C.A.L.I
Okay Your Punches Came Out Strong, But WordPlay Wasn't To Good, You Had Some Basic Vocabulary That Didn't Really Help Your Verse At All, You Structure Was Chaotic....Personals Wasn't Hitting Hard, Most Of Them Was Played, Your Body Of The Verse I Admit Was Better Then HeadGames, But Opener And Closer, Made You Go Down In THis Battle, As Well As The Vocabulary And Structure, Over All This Battle Was Pretty Close....8.5/10
Structure, Was All HeadGames, Punches Was A Tie, But Vocabulary And Personals Has To Go To HeadGames, Due To C.A.L.I.'s Played Out Personals, Decent Battle Both Could Do Better, I Saw You Both Write Better Before
Vote=HeadGames
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