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Voted For: hotshh!
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Kid What Happen I Saw You Do Way Better Before??? Anyway You Had Some Decent Punches In This Verse, Vocabulary Was Mostly Basic But Was Cool, Structure Was Decent, Need To Add Some Personals Into Here More Then What You Have, Also Multi's Would Of Helped You Out On This Verse, But You Didn't Have To Many, Meta's Would Of Made This Verse Better, But Your Body Of The Verse Was Decent Wasn't Feeling The Opener, But CLoser Was Good, I Liked The Last Line, Lol! Anyway OverAll........8.5/10
Hotshh!
By Far Your Verse Was Decent, I Mean Punches Was In Order, Came Out With A Few Personals But Must I Remind You That Some Are Played, Structure Was As Well As Good, Opener And Closer Was Neat, Enjoyed Reading This, The body Of Your Verse Was Also Decentm Vocabulary, Nice Shit Coz,
Third And Fourth Line Was Decent, Over All...8.8/10
Both Of You Came Hard, And Had Some Decent Punches But Hotshh! Came Harder By Two Points Over His Vocabulary And Punches, Personals Went To Both Of You, Coz It Was A Tie, Along With The Structure, Bot Of You Are Dope.....
Vote=Hotshh!
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