hotshh: Paralyze ya Textures....Apply the Pressure have You Die in Stretchers
Fry him Extra,Ya heart dont Pump blood..So U'll have to Lie in Ketchup
Look, Ya Timings Lack..plus ya Rhymings That, make You Kinda Wack
Dishem Like a Dime of Crack Behind da Back, 2 broke 2 Rewind it back
Shit, you Figure Racing against this kid You Facing?... it's Obliteration
Leave ya Liver Wasted, You shoulda 'No Show'd' Like Tigre Basement
from Far Away Ill leave U Scar'd and Slayed, You Starved and Played
Fars I Say kid You arent "JAY"..ranked number 1009 cuz Marvin's Gaye

This was real good. Opener was good. Nice use of the frying/ketchup metas and good multi to use.
Closer was the key element of the whole battle. "scarred and played, starved and played" the "rank 1009 cuz marvin's gay" was a killer bar. Top form, nice personla punch that hit hard and (in my opinion) just tipped the result for the battle.
Good punches and great vocab used in this. Nice flow and structure too.



MarveJay: i doubt dis fag win,datz y im laughin,hotshh go run & tell a admin...
im laughin,cuzz ya cash thin its "girls on my 2 fukk list" but u add-men..
basically,ya basic b u been waitin patiently..till da day u was facin me..
u da fakest g,no guns u got beef u gon spray em with mase then flee...
roc'n a rainbow flag at gay riots ya cd i aint buyin my killa's? they ridin
homie jay violent,try it i ask u if u was "HOT" rv just stayed "quiet"..*shh*

Good verse aswel. Opener was ok, could have came harder there. Liked the "add-men" -nice.
Closer was ok, but once again could have come harder, i was feeling the "shh" thing but it wasnt enough.
Punches were good but didnt have the quantity. If there was another line or two you might have given more to go on but either way it was still good.

VOTE: HOTSHH

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