This was feedback posted for hotshh!
IP:
not nearly enuff posts to vote but this was a hot battle. hot came hard on just about every line.. i was impressed. except 4 the last line, that was kinda weird... best lines were "killin ya own career" and the cock tease... both classic... very nice
HG- i liked this spit. I'm glad you took the time to explain the 1st punch. usually i hate explanations, but that made the punch make so much more sense. i say bravo on that wordplay and such...to me, the last line was just really played cuz i heard that joke a million times... were you talkin about the matrix tho (when men;s backs bend)? my extra special favorite line was : I provide cheers... hot "shh" just silences the croud" that line was great... mucho aplauso...
good job both of you
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