i keep my promises.. i believe that your lines were pretty short BUT the way your worded everything was very nice.. my favorite parts were:

i'm not a steady man
i'm still a boy i just claim i can do what these men can
i get so racked with rage
cause i push and i pant
i don't even act my age
wish i could but i can't
my dope dreams
they all float through my hope streams
^^you were straight forward with your content but it was a good thing in this case...

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