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Old 02-05-05, 12:28 AM   #12
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Voted For: Ear Ational

short but sweet battle... i'm really feeling this props to both you.. aight BREAKDOWN:

~EAR RATIONAL~
i must say you have the best opener:
twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
^^was feeling the nameplay, flow and nice punch to start the battle off... 7/10

go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
^^effective personal lMao @ Dexter's Lab omg, nice wordplay my goodness.. this was a hot bar, nice punch 10/10

this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew
^^an aight closer, nice tie wit politics and his crew name, not bad for a finisher.. i say 6/10

23/30 (76.6%) ---you had a solid 3 bars, your opener was hot as well as your second bar.. you had some effective punches, and creative personals..

Dex:
So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag
^^^an aight attempt for a personal... not a good punch nor opener.. 5/10

Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”
^^first half was aight, nice flow in this bar but the second half is played as ever... 3/10

Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”
^^bar is stretched.... had a really good flow until mid-way the second portion... first half played with rock and rock stars, and the bottom half was wack... 1/10

Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?
^^not the best closer but prolly one of your best bars.. it was the most creative than the others, but it wasn't hard-hitting 6/10

15/40 (37.5%)- i expected you to come way harder than you did, you had some pretty played lines, that's one of the reasons you lost this one.... the other is that you had NO effective punches, you had good set-ups for punches but they just weren't there..

v/ Ear Ational
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