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Voted For: Spite
phive: fix ya structure mayne... and try not to use so many self-glorification lines... you had some aight lines in your verse overall.. however Spite came harder with his lines, a better structure, both ya flow was pretty good.. but i wasn't feeling Spite's closer yours beat his barely... the best lines in this battle were:
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
^^those lines right there, was enuff to take the battle.. kinda funny but a nice punch, the only one that stood out even tho the lines are in separate bars, i think the way you worded them were nice..
Spite gets my vote on this one..
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