anxiety.......
you didnt have alot of multies.......wasnt very much vocab.....did have good flow.....structer was good....scheme was coo.....like the story......had raw emotion.....I love that


big chase.......
you had good multeis not many tho.......you had very good vocab.......good flow....structer was good.....scheme too.......wasnt alot of story.....lacked the emotion u tryed to express.......





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