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Old 02-05-05, 01:19 AM   #14
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Voted For: Ear Ational

this was a pretty decent battle here struture and vocab us bout even flow went to dex it read smoother here so heres the punch breakdown

twizted government.........shit it sounds like a club for sex
its like were playin his cd tha way everyone is hittin the dex
DECENT PUNCH LINES SHOULD HAVE BEEN SWITCHED WOULDVE MADE IT DOPER BUT GOOD 6/10
go back to lab and write betta lines, i didnt think u were so slow
cause dex's punches are bout as animated as his cartoon show
DECENT PUNCH AGAIN GOOD PERSONAL 7/10[B]
this battle aint a mystery by my skill remains a clue
no-one likes our government so whats that say about your crew
[B]HAHA ANOTHER DECENT PUNCH AND PERSONAL 7/10

PRETTY GOOD CONSITENT PUNCHES HERE OVERALL NICE DROP
20/30



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So im a homo english fag? but HE be dressed in drag
Only get successful on the front of GAY Monthly mag
HAHA DOPE SHIT HERE LMFAO GAY JOKED IS PLAYED BUT THIS WAS WORDED REALLY NICE 8/10
Ational got plenty great male “friends” that stay at his place
Cant let him die without a “Will”, cos there sure aint a “grace”

OK I FUCKING HATE THAT SHOW I GET WHAT YOU MEAN THOUGH LIKE I SAID GAY JOKES IS PLAYED AND THATS TWICE AND THIS WAS WEAK HERE 3/10
Start beef with Korn or Slipknot, still wont have battles that rock
Even if you on fire, you aint hot, too busy wiv snap crackle and “pop”
I DIDNT GET THIS MAYBE IT WAS A PERSONAL YOU SHOUL EXPLAIN WAS KINDA WACK ANYWAYS BUT FIRST LINE WAS GOOD 4/10
Ear Asked for “friendly” beef, but I aint the laughing cow
Your verbally reduced to mincemeat, whos laughing now?
THIS WAS CORNY BUT I REALLY LIKED IT ANYWAYS LOL PRETTY DECENT 7/10
OK DEX ILL USE YOUR 3 BEST LINES SO YOU CAN HAVE OUTTA 30 ALSO AND YOU HAVE 19/30 PUNCHES COULDVE BEEN BETTER YOU HAD THE POTENTIAL TO WIN THIS YOU ONLY LOST BY ONE POINT ITS LIKE HALF YOUR VERSE IS REAL NICE OTHER HALF IS WACK LIKE YOU RUSHED SOME OF THE LINES DAMN DEX YOU SHOULDVE WON THIS BUT YOU SLACKED IN THEM LINES STILL I SEE MADD POTENTIAL IN THIS YOU MIGHTVE LOST BUT YOULL BE DOPE SOON IF YOU KEEP ELEVEATING BUT YOUR LACKING 2 BARS HURT YOU HERE WHEN YOU SHOULDVE WON

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