Voted For: Pleim

Nemesis i notice you have elevated since last time i seen you battle... and Pleim i never seen you battle period so here goes with the critique:

You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne
You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains
^^nice personal aight opener

Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up
I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up
^^omg another nice personal lol @ the edge up part

Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead
I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head
^^nice wordplay and another effective personal

You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck
Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck
^^lol nice closer, you verse had some really funny personals, very effective...

Nemesis:
No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb
couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb
^^not too bad of an opener, but not really hardhittin

dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name
cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame
^^nice flow but not very effective tho

u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none
this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun
^^aight coulda been way better...

messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine
break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine
^^nice flow, best bar so far... first half was decent

bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion
Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion
^^nice closer......

overall your verse needed work, your flow was fine, really good, but you missing wordplay and/or metaphors, you don't need the whole works in ya verse but you still gotta work on ya punches and try more personals.. get more creative wit ya lines... but for this battle, Pleim won it..

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